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Philosophy Personal Statement

Discover how to write an unique and exemplary Cambridge Philosophy personal statement using our proven tactics.

Cambridge Philosophy Personal Statement

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Personal statements for every course

Our Oxbridge tutors have extensive experience with writing personal statements for a wide range of programmes, including Cambridge Philosophy. They can assist you in developing a strong and successful Cambridge Philosophy personal statement, ensuring that you incorporate key elements and write in the appropriate tone.

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How it Works...

Many applicants are denied a place on the Cambridge Philosophy course. Why? Simply because their personal statement is insufficient. Knowing what to include in your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement and how to phrase what you want to say to impress the admissions tutors can be difficult. Watch this video to find out how we can assist you.

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Response in
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Send us your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement at any stage of preparation. If you wish us to focus on a specific aspect of your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement, such as word count or relevant job experience, please let us know.

Our Cambridge Philosophy tutors will carefully analyse your personal statement for Philosophy at Cambridge and provide their assessment of what you did well and where you could strengthen.

After reading our feedback, you will feel energised and driven to improve your personal statement for Cambridge Philosophy. We invite you to contribute another draft at this phase if you choose.

You can now upload your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement to UCAS after making the necessary revisions. That's a huge relief!

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Line-by-line
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Our Oxbridge Philosophy tutors will carefully analyse your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement to ensure that it meets our high requirements.

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Complete with an
analysis summary

We will send you a line-by-line analysis of your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement, as well as feedback on how you fared in each of the critical areas on which the Cambridge Philosophy admissions staff will be focusing.

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Consider the revisions we suggested for your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement after reading our feedback. You are welcome to contact us at any time for additional assistance or to request another Cambridge Philosophy personal statement assessment!

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To make the most of the time you have together, your Oxbridge Philosophy tutor will examine your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement and provide some preliminary input before to your one-on-one encounter.

You can discuss your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement in real time with your tutor and receive continuous feedback.

After the session, you can revise your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement at your convenience and contact your tutor if you have any further queries.

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Reducing word count

Your tutor can assist you in minimising the number of words you use and refining the content to the most important elements.

Work Experience

Your Oxbridge tutor will be able to assist you in connecting your relevant work experience to your interest and enthusiasm for Philosophy.

Spelling and Grammar

We will thoroughly evaluate your Philosophy PS's spelling, grammar, tone, and paragraph structure.

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Extra Reading

We will assist you in connecting books and presentations you've heard to specific modules in the Cambridge Philosophy Course.

Motivation for Philosophy

You'll learn how to best articulate your reasons for studying Architecture in the Oxbridge learning environment.

Language Style

Your Philosophy tutor will improve your sentence structure, tone of voice, and balance of subtopics.

How can we improve
your Personal Statement?

  1. Personal Analysis

    Rather than just simply providing basic advice, we will go over your writing and provide personalised analysis.

  2. Reducing Word Count

    Although sticking to the 4,000 characters limit can be challenging, we will assist you in writing more clearly.

  3. Improving Language

    Our tutors have all produced successful personal statements for the Cambridge Philosophy course and employ our tried-and-true methods.

  4. Grammar Checking

    We'll make certain that you don't submit a Philosophy personal statement with poor grammar, as Cambridge will reject it.

  5. Reviewed by Philosophy Tutors

    Your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement will be proofread by a team of tutors who are familiar with what Cambridge is looking for.

  6. 1-to-1 Feedback Lessons

    You will receive continuing guidance to ensure the high quality of your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement.

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Jan 2020

I'm so thankful for the help Shameena gave! She managed to cut out 1,000 characters from my medicine personal statement! She also gave some great insights into how I could improve.

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Jan 2020

Thanks to Oxbridge Mind's Personal Statement check I managed to get invited to 4 interviews! They were very quick in their turnaround, and were able to address the areas I needed to edit.

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Jan 2020

I was surprised by how detailed Oxbridge Mind were in their feedback - they noticed things my head of sixth form didn’t. I liked the fact that I could Skype the tutor and discuss the edits through with her.

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July 2019

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October 2019

The feedback they gave was very constructive and helped me cut down words. They took extra care to make sure I understood the feedback they were giving, and implement it effectively.

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September 2018

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August 2017

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August 2019

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September 2019

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August 2019

At first I was reluctant as I was skeptical that it was cheaper than most providers. However, I was very happy! My editor, Shameena, spotted grammar mistakes and helped me cut my word count

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July 2019

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Our packages

An expert Oxbridge tutor will assess your personal statement, and all of our packages cover content, structure, and grammar analysis. Whatever option you choose, you can be certain that you will have your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement within 48 hours, or your money will be refunded.

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  • Grammar Checking
  • Analysis on Character Limit
  • Writing Suggestions

Our proven
4-Step Method

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Send us your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement

Send us your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement in any stage of development. You can also tell us if you want us to focus on a certain aspect of your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement, such as word count or relevant job experience.

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Analyse

We’ll analyse your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement

Our advisors will thoroughly analyse your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement and provide their own assessment of what you did well and where you could improve.

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Improve

Write, Revise & Repeat

After reading our feedback, you will feel energised and determined to improve your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement. We invite you to contribute another draught at this step if you choose.

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Submit

Submit and Relax

You can now upload your Cambridge Philosophy personal statement to UCAS after adding in the appropriate changes. What a relief, right?

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