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Architecture Personal Statement

With our recognised strategies, you can learn how to create an exceptional and exemplary Cambridge Architecture personal statement.

Cambridge Architecture Personal Statement

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Personal statements for every course

Our Oxbridge tutors have first-hand experience of creating personal statements for a variety of programmes, including Cambridge Architecture. They can help you write a strong and successful Cambridge Architecture personal statement, making sure that you include key elements and write in the correct tone.

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How it Works...

Many applicants lose out on a spot on the Cambridge Architecture course because their personal statement isn’t up to scratch. It can be challenging to know exactly what to put in your Cambridge Architecture personal statement and how to impress the admissions tutors. Watch this video to learn about how we can help you.

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How Oxbridge Mind’s Personal Statement Check works

Many applicants lose out on a spot on the Cambridge Architecture course because their personal statement isn't up to scratch.

How we can help

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Response in
48 hours

  • Send
  • Analyse
  • Improve
  • Submit

Send us your Cambridge Architecture personal statement, in any draft stage—first, fifth, or final. Additionally, you can let us know if you want us to target a certain feature of your Cambridge Architecture personal statement, such as word count or relevant work experience.

Our Cambridge Architecture tutors will carefully review your personal statement for Cambridge Architecture and provide their own evaluation of what you have done well and where you could make some changes.

You'll feel empowered and motivated to enhance your personal statement for Cambridge Architecture after reading our feedback. If you would like to, we encourage you to send another draft at this stage.

You can now upload your Cambridge Architecture personal statement to UCAS after adding in the appropriate changes. What a relief, right?

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Line-by-line
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Your Cambridge Architecture personal statement will be attentively reviewed by our Oxbridge Architecture tutors to make sure it matches our high standards.

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Complete with an
analysis summary

We will provide you with line-by-line analysis for your Cambridge Architecture personal statement, as well as comments on how you performed in each of the crucial areas that the Cambridge Architecture admissions team will be focusing on.

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Consider the improvements we've recommended after reading our feedback for your Cambridge Architecture personal statement. You are welcome to get in touch with us at any stage for more guidance or to ask for another Cambridge Architecture personal statement review!

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1-1 sessions with
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Your Oxbridge Architecture tutor will evaluate your Cambridge Architecture personal statement and provide some initial feedback prior to your one-on-one meeting to make the most of the time you have together.

You can go over your Cambridge Architecture personal statement with your tutor in real-time and receive continuous advice.

Following the session, you can revise your Cambridge Architecture personal statement at your own pace and reach out to your tutor if you have any more questions.

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Architecture Personal Statement Examples:

Reducing word count

Your Oxbridge tutor can help you cut down your words and refine the content to the key points which have impact.

Work Experience

Our Oxbridge experts can help you link your work experience to your interest and passion for Architecture.

Spelling and Grammar

We will do a full review of the spelling, grammar, tone and paragraph structure of your Cambridge Architecture Personal Statement.

Excerpt from an Architecture Personal Statement…

I have completed work experience with three different companies. The placements were really provocative as they gave me three almost contrasting environments to work in with completely different types of people. I worked on Sketch-Up to complete a brief on a personal design project, giving me a good grounding in the software. I had to create a 3D plan of the Birmingham office for one of the company’s future use, using a mixture of both CAD and Sketch-Up. I also had an opportunity to practise my sketching and technical drawing and find out about the historical design and architecture of the areas I was working in. I worked with the third company most recently and I thought my time here was very constructive, as I was involved in meetings with structural engineers who were working with the company as well as giving my opinions on some of the projects the company was bidding for. I found all the placements insightful and beneficial, and they definitely improved my understanding and technical ability when it came to sketching and designing.

Extra Reading

We will help you link books and talks you've experienced to specific modules in the Cambridge Architecture Course.

Motivation for Architecture

You'll learn how to best articulate your reasons for studying Architecture in the Oxbridge learning environment.

Language Style

Your Architecture tutor will adjust your sentence structure, tone of voice and the balance between different sub topics.

How can we improve
your Personal Statement?

  1. Personal Analysis

    Instead of just offering you general guidance, we'll go over your writing and provide tailored analysis.

  2. Reducing Word Count

    Although sticking to the 4,000 character limit can be challenging, we will help you write more concisely.

  3. Improving Language

    All of our tutors have written successful personal statements for the Cambridge Architecture course and use our tried-and-tested approaches..

  4. Grammar Checking

    We'll make sure you don't submit an Architecture personal statement with poor grammar, as Cambridge would reject it.

  5. Reviewed by Architecture Tutors

    A team of tutors with knowledge of what Cambridge is searching for will proofread your Cambridge Architecture personal statement.

  6. 1-to-1 Feedback Lessons

    To make sure your Cambridge Architecture personal statement is top-notch, you will receive ongoing mentoring.

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Jan 2020

I'm so thankful for the help Shameena gave! She managed to cut out 1,000 characters from my medicine personal statement! She also gave some great insights into how I could improve.

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Vikalesh

Jan 2020

Thanks to Oxbridge Mind's Personal Statement check I managed to get invited to 4 interviews! They were very quick in their turnaround, and were able to address the areas I needed to edit.

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Robyn

Jan 2020

I was surprised by how detailed Oxbridge Mind were in their feedback - they noticed things my head of sixth form didn’t. I liked the fact that I could Skype the tutor and discuss the edits through with her.

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July 2019

I had my medicine personal statement reviewed 4 times by Oxbridge Mind and they went above and beyond what I expected! They are a group of enthusiastic and professional teachers!

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Xheng

October 2019

The feedback they gave was very constructive and helped me cut down words. They took extra care to make sure I understood the feedback they were giving, and implement it effectively.

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September 2018

I would highly recommend the Oxbridge Mind medicine personal statement review. They made sure they didn't just rewrite my personal statement but instead gave some real individual feedback!

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August 2017

I could not recommend this website more! I bought a medicine personal statement check from many companies but theirs was the best. They also responded within 24h before my UCAS deadline

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August 2019

I had a two hour 1-1 session with Alice who was so helpful in cutting down my medicine personal statement. She helped me with my surgical work experience paragraph, which had a few lengthy sentences.

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September 2019

The medicine personal statement check happened so quickly - I got it back instantly. I have no complaints at all! Speed was good - I got it back within 2 days. The analysis was detailed and clear to me.

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August 2019

At first I was reluctant as I was skeptical that it was cheaper than most providers. However, I was very happy! My editor, Shameena, spotted grammar mistakes and helped me cut my word count

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July 2019

If it wasn't for Oxbridge Mind, I would never have known how to write a medicine personal statement so well. They helped teach me how to make links between my work experience and my skills.

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Our packages

An experienced Oxbridge tutor will evaluate your personal statement, and all of our packages include analysis of your content, structure, and grammar. Whatever plan you choose, you can be confident that you'll receive your Cambridge Architecture personal statement within 48 hours, or your money back.

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3 Personal Statement Checks

  • 3 Personal Statement Checks
  • Expert Feedback in 48h
  • Real-Time Feedback
  • Grammar Checking
  • Analysis on Character Limit
  • Writing Suggestions

Our proven
4-Step Method

Step 1

Send

Send us your Cambridge Architecture personal statement

Send us your Cambridge Architecture personal statement, in any draft stage—first, fifth, or final. Additionally, you can let us know if you want us to target a certain feature of your Cambridge Architecture personal statement, such as word count or relevant work experience.

Step 2

Analyse

We’ll analyse your Cambridge Architecture personal statement

Our specialists will carefully review your Cambridge Architecture personal statement and provide their own evaluation of what you have done well and where you could make some changes.

Step 3

Improve

Write, Revise & Repeat

You’ll feel empowered and motivated to enhance your Cambridge Architecture personal statement after reading our feedback. If you would like to, we encourage you to send another draft at this stage.

Step 4

Submit

Submit and Relax

You can now upload your Cambridge Architecture personal statement to UCAS after adding in the appropriate changes. What a relief, right?

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